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It will kill . . .



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:iconvanillalacekisses:
Head warning: I skip around a LOT in my conversations, so I apologize if I don't make sense.

I love this picture. The red accents on a black and white picture can be overused, but this is very well executed; just enough to get the point across, but not overdone which is exactly what 'accents' should do.
The vision behind this is excellent. As a smoker, I know how hard it is to quit. I see many pictures on how cigarettes have a hold on you and how it's a death grip, blah blah blah, but this reminds me of a starving dog with a piece of meat in it's mouth: it will die while holding onto the meat. Same concept here: this person knows it will kill her, but she refuses to let go even to the very end. It's VERY poignant and I love that fact. Quick question: is that lipstick on the end of the cigarette? Nice touch, if it is. It really doesn't affect the overall picture, but it is a interesting touch. I see a bunch of 'Smoking = kills' on here, but the execution was what caught me. Kudos on that one. The picture is flawless. The manipulations are almost perfect.
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:iconhanooda:
hello..!! okai as a start great choice in making it b&w and having the blood be in red...STANDS OUT..!! what could have added to the beauty and message of this pic would be if the lips were a bit darker, cz it common to see a smokers lips to be dark..another thing that i think would be better is if there was a strip of smoke coming from the end of the cigarette to show that it is in the present, as in the cigarette is lighted. overall the pic is amazing, and u have done an extremely wonderful job in sending out a message that many people are neglecting these days.

best of all

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:iconelessar777:
Nice shot...

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...on ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur. L'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux...
:iconlonney:
this is so perfect!!

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:iconhmsa:
amazing ..
wished the face centralized


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جد الفكره خطيييره

أبهرني العمل وبقووه

سلمت أناملك خيه

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:icontote-bag:
Oh my god! This has no views, and I can't critique it cause its perfect!
The originality would be a 4 out of 5 and thats the only flaw! Well done.

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:icondroubi:
I agree!!

amazing work my dear : )

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:iconwinterdruidess:
thank u so much for this photo. is very special to me:) my mom is srsl ill cause of smoking...

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:iconahmadfekri:
Mashallah really Great work ... Keep It uP M ^^

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:iconuae-speed:
very nice shot and idea :) ... mmm but the name :S maybe the taste or something related to the mouth would be better

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dOnt wOnder why peOple gO crazy .. wOnder why they dOnt !! :P
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